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Re: Princess Lynnea: Chapter II
Overall, I like the way that the story is headed. There is just one thing, it all seems so detached. So impersonal. Don't get me wrong, there is emotion and ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Princess Lynnea: Chapter I
I really like it so far but I agree that you should add emotion as to how she feels more often.
Jul 21, 2011