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I love that you redid it. I agree with the others that the middle one was just... not up to par with the other two. Anyways, I love the concept. ...

This is pretty interesting. I like it, don't get me wrong, but it seems like the lines are too... perfect. You are drawing a human. Are humans perfect? Absolutely not! ...

These are great. Absofrickenlutely great. I loved the first one. I kind of FELT the dream state seeping out of it. I felt as if I was that little child ...

I LOVE this. There is absolutily nothing I can crit this for, so Im sticking to just reviewing. Things I love: The snake The eye The chain (Its my favorite ...

This is strange. Im not the best at sketching, and not nearly as good at reviewing sketching. Ill just point out some major flaws I see 1)The lines are a ...

Urg. Urg. Urg. Urg. That is all I have to say. Why did you have to put the person in there. WONDERFUL shot. Other than the person. Im sure there ...

*desert lol Anyways, I like these. 1) 4/5. I like the shot. It has good structure and color, but I don't quite get the meaning. 2)4.5/5. Like this alot. My ...

Hmmm. Very interesting *Strokes chin-beardy thingy*. I like the actual poem, I can say that upfront, but the formating is weird. It is obvious that the formating is different for ...

Very short free-verse. Strange because I usually rhyme and write much longer...but I like it: My blood flows; each pulse defined My tears burn; shocks of life Tears and blood ...

This is, in my opinion, a little immature. If you didn't think being a moderator would be work, what did you think it was going to be? Fun? Sure being ...

Wow. Bubble is pretty. Im beggining to feel like a stalker lol. Too many comments and not enough pics. Ill try to get one up today :P.

For what I've read. I LOVE IT. I'm enjoying this crit. I will be editing this post with updates on my crit. I am currently starting page 2. A Shot ...

Azila did a pretty decent job on Plot Crits. I will, however, be starting my crits on the actual book itself, not as much on the plot. *Puts critting glasses ...

Refrain. A pretty hard concept to grasp. So much so that I avoid using it altogether, but It still finds a way into my poetry. I think you did a ...

Just saying, to tori, if the first HALF is only 20,000 words (Making 40,000 its finished count) , it is only a novella. Im pretty sure the lowest it is ...