WritersUnleashed

If you could bring the internet into it, nanowrimo does a lot of things in the classrooms.

I probably won't be able to do too much, but I'll do some crits (such as maybe crit every other chapter). I skimmed it and it looks pretty good.

I remember reading that opening line in gunslinger. I thought right then and there that this was going to be an awesome novel.....but it was probably his worst one ever.

Awww

There are a few things a can crit for this, but it is otherwise a pretty good shot. 1)The background is kind of weird. I don't know what it is, ...

My god this is terrible. How is this featured? It is obvious that you are completely under educated about the events that are occurring. 1) Your similes! What!? Ice cream ...

So, does anybody listen to music to help inspire them? I listen to Beehthoven's Symphonies while I write my poetry. It seems to help me alot.

Nothing really to comment here, except to please enjoy and like :) Never forget me, Never let go. I’m always behind you, Just so you know. Hold on to our ...

Celtica, why did I imagine you as some really tall redhead? lol.

No aethistic comments. And yes, I know it doesn't rhyme lol. The father in our life, Please be merciful. I know that I have sinned. You know it more than ...

I know it is short. I know it is blunt. HOWEVER Props to whoever can decipher the meaning. I'll give you a hint. A golden kite and a silver wind. ...

I don't know why I did my last post in 3rd person... STEPHENO "That's actually pretty funny", I said. Graffiti had walked right by me without even noticing I was ...

Wow, this is great. I have to tell you the truth. I am not a particular fan of your poetry. I mean, it was good and all, but I could ...

Dude, you do not know HOW much I laughed at this. This was me: 10 Yup 9 Yup 8 Lol 7 Lol times 2 6 Now thats just sad 5 ...

Being arachniphobic, I really liked this poem, but I think that the ending could say "Then I squished you" but that thats my opinion. And that was sarcasm. Anyways, the ...