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Re: Eliza and Morgan
i really liked this although i think you should of put a bit more feeling into it. it was a bit short and i would have liked you to explain ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: The bear boy
And that’s how we came into being." said my grandpa as he puffed a little smoke into the air I never understood that story. The smell of smoke filled the ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: not quite alone continued...( read not quite alone first)
I felt a cold chill rush up my spine as the darkness touched my shoulder with his cold hands, my skin under his icy hand hurt. Fear was rushing through ...
Jun 2, 2010 -
Re: Just a dream, or something more?
Hey Marth ( can i call you that?) well anyway i thought since you kinda reviewed my short-story id experiment and see if I've got What it take to be ...
May 26, 2010 -
Re: Not quite alone
thanks dude sure i'll tell u when i write more
May 26, 2010 -
Re: A game of Cat and Mouse (Prologue)
Way ta go Dude. this is realy good. i don't realy have much to say on it ( i'll leave that to the pro's) but its realy good
May 25, 2010 -
Re: Not quite alone
The air was thick with mist. It was dark and the sounds of night were all around me, taunting me willing fear to slowly creep up into my body and ...
May 25, 2010 -
Re: Warning signs
The walls all around me were a darkish grey I was in the police station, a man in a dark blue suite was sitting across from me. He was apparently ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: The Wrong Eyes
wow. dude this was awesome. i really like how it was so unpredictable. keep writing i'd like to see what happens next
May 23, 2010 -
Re: Lucy
thanks dude i never actually thought of any of that but thanks I'll take it all into consideration when I attempt writing again. i cant thank you enough for helping ...
May 23, 2010 -
Re: HEy
Thank you, and sorry I might be a real bother with all my questions in the future but I really hope on improving my writing skills so do help Well ...
May 22, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Im new too. im loving the site ,i like the whole evryone is here to help evryone vibe. just joined like a few hours ago and ive been sitting on ...
May 22, 2010 -
Re: HEy
i jst joined and i'm having lots of fun. i realy enjoy reading all your stories and stuff. i look forward to writing ( not proising anything but ill try) ...
May 22, 2010 -
Re: Azaleas for Susie
it was well wrriten and i loved the last line. well done dude thumbs up
May 22, 2010 -
Re: Lucy
Life, what is it? I find myself questioning its existence all the time. The fact that I can feel the cold wet drops of rain on my skin now does ...
May 22, 2010
