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I loved this. I was singing it in my head the whole time I was reading it. The pain is evident. I liked the rhyme scheme too. I saw that ...

I thought that this was amazing, I absolutely loved it. I hope that you'll post more poetry. : )

I really liked this piece, I thought you coveyed your emotions very well and I could tell you put a lot into this. The slightly random rhyme scheme worked well ...

My veins run cold, as my heart aches The pain I will always hold. The night you went out, I had no doubt, that you'd be back. I laughed, until ...

I like this,and I understand what you were talking about with share some memories, like you have in this piece. ; )

Thank you, I do agree with the critisms, however I don't think that I will change this poem, I wrote it for myself. I will probably do another poem including ...

I like it, it is orginal!! : Hopefully you post more.

I walk towards your grave, trying my hardest to be brave. I feel a tear slide down my face, a hole rests in my heart that never will be replaced. ...

I liked it, but like mentioned above, it could of had a tad bit more of a description. I think that could easily be fixed with another chapter. Please, please ...

I like it. It's fun. Hopefully it will develop into a more orginal piece. Like mentioned above by various people I can almost see the ending, writing itself. Good work ...

I like it. It's fun. It could turn into a more orginal piece. Like a lot of others had said earlier, I can almost see the ending. Good start though, ...

Alrighty, it was pretty good. I like the descriptive details. My only critism, besides the ones already stated is, the fact that you spelled bowl like bowel. Bowel is a ...

I liked this. Its very powerful. I also liked how you opened and closed with the same, lines,good job!!!

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