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I really liked this overall. I couldn't find any mistakes and I saw what I was reading. It's very good and I can't wait until the next chapter!

She never fits in either, because she hides this secret no one knows see, There is something special about Sarah. There should not be capitalized. It is Sarah's first day ...

That Night, When I was five, Haunts me everyday, I remember it all, Every detail. I remember that night, I wouldn't stop crying, I remember my mom, Not waking up, ...

I read the story from the beginning and was so happy when I finally saw the fifth chapter! Amazing(:

I found it very intresting, I like the way how you continue off a chapter in just the right way.

I read this before I read any of the other parts. I found it a little confusing so I went back and read the other chapters. I really like how ...

I really like this poem. I could see the image of this happening. I like your choice of words and the title(it drew me in). Keep it up!(:

How do you get the text below your name?

I related to this on so many levels, it's nice for someone to finally have the guts to say it loud and say it proud(I think). You said it as ...

All I have to say is that this is amazing.

Very descriptive, I love it!

Amazing, I really enjoyed reading it an being able to almost see it as it was happening.

Amazing. It was like I was there, watching the scene envelope in front of me. Keep writing!!

I am new to this site so I'll say a little bit about me. My name is Faith and I am an insomniac. I have wanted to be an author ...

Welcome to me! Laugh out loud. As a new member I'd just like to welcome all other new members as well. So far, I've really liked this website and I ...