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Re: Longing to Be Free (Queen of the Robots Chapter 2)
Another great chapter, though I really wish it would've been longer because I'm still so anxious as to what happens next. Lol. If you get some time in, I'd really ...
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: Insomnia
It's night, I close my eyes, Open them just as quick, I don't want to live it, Over again. I hardly sleep, I hardly have, When I crawl, Out of ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Dear Kitty
[ b]Wow. I like your reference to Anne Frank in this poem. It really helped me understand the stanza a little bit more. I didn't see anything wrong as far ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Again
Again I fall into that black hole, Again I have been surrounded, Again By walls of hate and pain. Again I find myself wishing I was someone else, Again I ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Died And Tried Tried And Died.
Amazing, yet again. You really have talent, everything you write just has this sense about it. I can feel as the characters are feeling and visualize it as well. I ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: He Makes Me
He makes me smile My real smile, He makes me laugh My real laugh, He makes me Who I want to be He makes me feel So happy, He makes ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: 317 (4)
so interesting. I read the first couple of chapters but it was this one that really intruiges me. I wasn't excpecting it to get better and better with each chapter ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Held Captive (Queen of the Robots Chapter 1)
wow. More more more! I want to read more! I was drawn in by your title and almost went insane when it ended the way it did. I am anxious ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: For the Sake of Tomorrow
This is amazing. I'd love to read more of it. Please post the rest, I didn't find any errors or anything in it and I really enjoyed it. The title ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Phobia
Wow. That's pretty much all I really have to say. It was amazing and I love, just LOVE the details. It kept me reading and I really anjoyed it. A ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: You Are
Aw, I really like this poem, I really do. I couldn't find any errors or anything in it so it's very well done. Your title caught my eye so I ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: No Ordinary Girl
It's really good and I really like it but one thing, what's with this: All the magic and funcifififififfinvfivnrn
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Savior:Chapter Three
Another great chapter, I read the first two but I never responded. This is really getting good, I must know more! I'm really enjoying your story so far. I hope ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: the Shotgun Willies
Wow, yet another great story by you! I am definetly enjoying your stories, they keep me busy! This one was kind of freaky but really good at the same time. ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: The Hardest Goodbye (Chapter One)
Chapter One You know those days when you feel like nothing can get worse and then it just does? This was one of those days. It’s not like Annabeth wanted ...
Aug 25, 2011
