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So I saw you still didn't have a review for this one and I'll tell you this it's a great book so far. I've read every single chapter and I ...

This was really good, you know, I'm curious as to who this mysterious Nathaniel kid is and I cannot wait to read more. It's keeping me wondering about how Lily's ...

This is so beautiful it's unbelievible. I couldn't stop reading from the first line of the first stanza to the last line of the last stanza. It captures the true ...

Um, not to be like, a hazard or a buzzkill but um....there's no pictures there. Please try to post them again because I'm always interested in seeing the pictures and ...

This was short. No worries, I find that the shorter the poem the more powerful they usually are and I think yours is one of the most powerful ones I've ...

Really well donecepts were beautiful and very well said. I could see everything as I was reading it and everything made crystal clear and precise sense. Please, don't change a ...

Your glass stairs my crack and crumble, I believe you meant may instead of my. Overall, besides that tiny mistake, I found this poem very well-done and amazing. I really ...

Chapter Two “Get off of her,” his voice was stern as Darius entered the room, gun in hand, and followed by the police. “Whoa there son, I don’t think you ...

The Fate I Never Chose. Wow. I really like the title it says something without even meaning to. I didn't see any grammatical mistakes I'd just like to say that ...

One step That’s all you take But it’s still Frozen, Imagine That. One scream That’s all you scream As you fall into And out of A black hole. Down, down ...

What happens next? That is my only question, I am anxious to read it. Cannot wait for you to bring out chapter one. I'll try to be the first one ...

I really enjoyed this but for some reason I just couldn't see myself in it. Now this isn't something to be worried about, no. This is something to be grateful ...

Very well done though it did have one tiny flaw. It could be a bit shorter, now usually I'd say ROCK ON! This poem is great because I love long ...

Interesting. That is all I really can say to this one. It must have been a very interesting dream. Though on the downside, I found it was very confusing at ...

First one to review!!! Alright, I guess that means I have to be the one to give you constructive crictism. Honestly, I didn't see anything wrong with this poem at ...