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Re: Logophile Mutilated & Keen
Logophile Mutilated Interesting and yet it was short, powerfully short. I enjoyed it very much and it described everything with great beauty and detail. I enjoyed reading it. Keen This ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: Staring into the Beautiful
I read it so I must be an awesome person! Lol, joking. It was a very beautiful poem and I like the poems with a name that isn't in the ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 1 -- Beginnings
PLease keep writing more onto this book because I love it! There is nothing, absolutely nothing, that you can change, because it's perfect the way it is. I enjoyed reading ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: I'll Lie
Wow. I really did find myself speechless after reading this. Why? It's sooo so so so good. Nothing was wrong and thw words flowed effortlessly off the page. Even I ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: Rhythm
The title stood out to me and so did the poem itself. Rhythm was shown in the poem so it really fits the title. I was drawn in by your ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: Forever 18
This is a very interesting thing. It sounds like a vampire story and I really hope that you'll make it longer because if you let it, this could become a ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: The Black Coats-1
Interesting chapter for your first one. I will agree that there were some sentences that didn't make much sense but you can fix them easily. For your first chapter, I ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Hunted ch. 19
When I read this chapter, I forgot how the other chapter was so I reread Chapter 18 and then read this one. This was another great chapter and I'm finding ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Hidden- Chapter Four
Yeah um, I just reviewed chapter five before reading chapter four. Haha. My mistake. But, I went back to chapter five after reading chapter four. You really are a great ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Hidden- Chapter Five
Hey. So I guess I'm your reviewer for the day...I really didn't see any errors or anything wrong in this chapter, and I'll be honest, I didn't read the first ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: My West Wing
This is a very beautiful poem as you've already been told. I did, like your first reviewer notice some mistakes that could be fixed but I'm sure she's filled you ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Pretty Girl
This was an amazing, amazing, amazing, so many amazings poem! I loved it so much and the only thing I'd change is the capitalization of the words, it's kind of ...
Sep 19, 2011 -
Re: in the face of filial piety
I really lked this poem, however, it should be capitalized in almost every stanza and you didn't use your punctuation very well, I overall liked the layout but I just ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: Blue Mist
So, I got in trouble for copying and pasting my reviews a while back and so I've learned heavily not to do that. So for the note: this isn't copied ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: I'm Tired
I can’t believe you think it works like that, You want to play it like that? I can play like that, You had no right to do that, No right ...
Sep 7, 2011
