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Wow. This is the perfect poem about poetry and words. I found nothing wrong with your layout or punctuation or grammar so overall that was very well done. As for ...

Wow. This isn't actually that bad, but however, because I have just started using this website a little while ago I'm still not really sure on what to do to ...

Well, I have to wasn't as good as I thought it would be, in fact, it was better!!! I looked at the title of what the drawing would most likely ...

Wow. Very veyr very good. I love it! Please post Chapter 2! The Kaze boy sounds really mysterious and yet really awesome! I want to know more about what hapens ...

Wow. I love this chapter. It's probably my favorit chapter so far, other than he one where Liam and Alicia kiss. I really want Liam and Alicia to get together ...

Wow this so descries how I'm treated sometimes. It's a very strong poem and it gets the point across but I think the title is what really drew me in. ...

Hello, I guess I'm your reviwer. Lol(: This is an amazing poem and I really don't think you need to change anything. I like this poem the way it is. ...

I am caressed by shadows, A part of me, A whole, Or even in that, An equal. I am the lover to darkness, The partner to Hell. I am saved ...

I pick a lighter, Plain or not, I pick a lighter, I pick it up. I've found an alternative, To the razor blade, Something that doesn't, Break the promise, I ...

No one told me, I stopped crying, No one told me, I started bleeding And stopped, Breathing. No one said, I was buried, In my thoughts, No one said, My ...

See how the king sits upon his throne And judges only by race? What complexed tone And such shy haste, As yet outside, The battle roams, Our soldier's never hide, ...

Such sophistication, Should come from needing me, Such utter confusion, Should come from never letting me go, Such breathlessness, Should remind you. I'm not a faithful person, But I stick ...

This is the next book in the The Hardest Goodbye Series....this was previously known as the Warned book but I didn't nearly get as much done in that one as ...

Awwww. I love this song, it would fit me and the guy I liked for 4 years but I stopped liking him in my 8th grade year. I really like ...

Very very very good. I think it should win even though it's not complete yet and even though the title was off by a few letters. I'm not sure how ...