WriteWriter

I really liked this poem, I have written poems myself, but this is an amazing poem. You should write more poems!(:

I liked your choice of words, the way I could almost feel the words float off the page.

This is a very good short story, personally, I could read it a few more times. I really liked the way that you explained how their emotions were. Nicely done!(:

Wow. I think it's very well spoken. Used the wrong format for it though. There should be commas.

Tonight I weep, A gentle weep, I'm not sad, So don't ask, I'm saying goodbye, To something inside. I wave my goodbye, To the old me, I try to embrace, ...