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Re: I Love You Preface
Summer “Mom, I’m going out for a swim,” Claire Redburn called as she took a step outside and peeled off her robe, revealing a red ruffled bikini. It was the ...
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: A Song For Solstice
This piece is very inspiring and I found myself smiling and singing where this twelve year old was singing. i like the idea of the solstice and the candlelight and ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Rylee at the Well
Wow. This is a very well written piece and I don't see anything that needs to be fixed. i had a little trouble understanding it at first but by the ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: From Me To You.
Wow. I'm really not so sure on how to review this when it's so beautiful. Every time you say "i" it needs to be capitalized. Never start a stanza or ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: I Love You (Preview)
Preview Of My New Book "I Love You" Which Is About A Guy And A Girl Who Love Each Other But He Lives In North Carolina And She Lives In ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Kill Me
Punished, Sent to Hell and back, I don't want to fight it Because it's the only thing, That seems real. It seems real enough That I forget my pain And ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: The Hardest Goodbye (Chapter Three)
Chapter Three “It started when I was three years old, my father, he started beating me and I knew what was happening even though that sounds impossible. He would come ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: The Hardest Goodbye (Chapter Three)
Chapter Three “It started when I was three years old, my father, he started beating me and I knew what was happening even though that sounds impossible. He would come ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Tense
Wow. This actually describes how I feel in a twisted way. It's amazing. I really can't say anything because it's as perfect as a poem can be.
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: Days Teach Me
Hello, I'm WriteWriter and I will be reviewing this poem. This poem really has nothing bad to talk about, it flowed with emotion and the words were just right in ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Fruitless Tree
Hey! So, I'm WriteWriter(WW) and I'll be reviewing you for today(: I love this poem and I could see the sadness of not being able to be harvested and not ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Another Day Prolouge
I really enjoyed this and I'm interested in seeing what happens next. I found it however, interesting that the point of view seemingly comes from one man, and that this ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Symphony #1
Haha. I had to laugh at the end; I have never written and will never write a poem. Seems enough to point of the obvious that you indeed just wrote ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Unsaid
This is really good. For some reason I get a sense that this or something close to it has happened to you. Though who am I to judge what is ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Unrequited
This is so sweet and I love how you use the two science terms of electron and proton. That's way cool and it adds emphasis to the short story which ...
Oct 21, 2011
