Wondergirl59

Okay, so that was a bit harsh, no? I liked it. Clearly, some not as much... It was good, keep writing :)

I agree that it would be good in past tense. But I still liked it. It was really good!

This is really good. It was kind of confusing at first but then I re-read it and it made sense. I loved the ending! Out of all of it that ...

This piece is something a lot of people can relate to, me included. I like how you explain how you feel but your not really saying much about the other ...

I don't care if other people see things wrong in this. I wish I could write that good, because that was amazing. I absolutely love it. I like how you ...

How do you fall out of love? You meet that one person, and they change your life forever. Then What? After all you go through,after all they put you through, ...

I totally know what your talking about. I know how if feels to be bullied, harassed, and beat down. That poem what everything I had ever felt put into words. ...

This is so frustrating! But I love it! I hate that it was just a dream but amazing writing and I want more. Keep writing!!!

I'm not going to say it's horrible. I'm not even going to say it's bad. I'm just going to give my comments. You didn't put any thought into it. You ...

That was really good. It was sort of applying the human race to the seasons of leaves. Well, that's how I saw it anyway. Really good though. Keep doing spontaneous ...

Oh my God. I absolutely love it. It's kind of sad at the end where you say you have to rebuild your castle but thats why I love it so ...

I like it. I think you should explain more how you feel, it's kind of short. But it's really good. I love how you were questioning your love throughout all ...

It's really sad. I like it though. I can't find anything wrong with your writing. Good job.

Can I just point out how incredably true that is? Yes, I think I can.

The spelling error idea was really cool. I didn't get it at first but then I realized. That was really cool. I know how you feel too, loosing someone close. ...