Wondergirl59

Think about things that have happened to you in the past. I also look at other peoples poetry and get inspired to start a new writing style.

1) I think this one shows your feelings okay, but it's a little bland. It could use more detail on how you feel. 2) I like this one. It shows ...

When I read this, I wasn't really sure what to think. I like the flow of it, and how you show your desire. But I find it a little confusing, ...

I really like this. It shows your emotion for the subject, and how you are remembering loved ones. Very good. :)

Rhythm of Love-Plain white Tee's

Thats where my mom ran off to! I'd call the F.B.I What would you do if you woke up in the body of an abnormally hairy woman?

The humans are mean to everyone Why are we mean?

It's sad but amazing. It's hard to think that someone would have to go through something like this. I thought it was really good and it painted an nice picture ...

I'm working on my detail writing, and I'm not very good at it. I know I have to tweak it, but I need some ideas on how to put in ...

Very different, very amusing, funny, very wholegrain. Sounds like toast! Or bagels... Please! Tell me what it is! The suspense is killing me!

I like your structure of your feelings. Plus I do like the title, but you could make it a little more intriguing. But I really liked it. Nice work! :)

I thought this was a really good piece. It it's a little hard to see what your feeling, but this is your personal experience. I thought it was really good. ...

Ok, so I've tried writing poetry, fiction, non-fiction, and now I'm stuck. I don't know what to try. Writers block is killing me. I want to try something new. Help ...

This is really hard to respond to. Your writing was great, but if all of that is true...I have no idea what to say. It's a horrible story, and by ...