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Re: Broken Jar (Rewritten)
I like how you perfectly set the scene. As I was reading, I felt as if I was there. That's my kind of writing. I also liked how you used ...
Mar 22, 2013 -
Re: Mirage
I love how the narrator has a connection to the color. The color then haunts the narrator, and soon it is all they see. To me, the white represents the ...
Mar 21, 2013
