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Re: Rawwrr (Reopened!)
Ohayou mina! (Hiya everybody!) Welcome to my reopened WRFF stall =) What I can offer anybody looking for a review is an honest review, which might as well be harsh. ...
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: Rebel Monster
Hiya! :) Let's get to business, shall we? The story's in spoiler along with my commentaries and impressions. The wind blows in from the little crack in the window. Its ...
Sep 15, 2011 -
Re: City of Secrets DT
Scarlett, I've decided to have my character follow yours and expect him to mess up a lot of your plans. If you think about your assassin figuring him out fast, ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: City of Secrets *Started | Permission Only*
William | Market Square "Have you heard the latest rumors? A dead body of minister Haverin was found this morning." "Seriously? Do you think it's got something to do with ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: City of Secrets DT
Yousu! =) I'd really like to participate in this SB, so here goes the profile -- the rest is up to decision. Name: William Jacknight Age: 18 Gender: Male Race: ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Edge of Appearance
This is a pretty old post and I didn't think I'd get any more on it =) Thank you for the reviews, I'll look into it once I get over ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Sparks; chapter one (revised)
Cheers! Let's get to bussiness, shall we? =) I've put your work into the spoiler, you can find my comments bellow your paragraphs and please, if it might seem too ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Memories
Cheers! Let's get to bussiness, shall we? The imaginery you use here is rather good with its simplicity, there's no need to crack one's mind nor spend too much time ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Warhammer 40k: Change and Decay pt1
Yousu! Let's get to business, shall we? =) The story is in the spoiler below with my comments. His hands touched the book delicately. Even through his armor he felt ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: The Blood Bearers (short story - please review!)
Cheers! I'm here to help you out as I'm quite acquitted with the 40k series =) Awesome games. I've put your story into the spoiler and my thoughts/impressions are in ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Garden of the Cursed *UPDATED* [Started | Full]
William Morning breeze brushes through William's loose hair as he stands, leaned against a wall of his own house in the outskirts of Leisis. Rising sun behind the horizon of ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Garden of the Cursed *UPDATED* [Started | Full]
Townsperson Name : William (Will) Jacknight Gender : Male Age : 25 Skills : Anything from quick tactics to underhanded tricks, his main objective is and has always been survival. ...
Jun 11, 2011 -
Re: Sacrificing Rememberance - Ch1
Under supreme reconstruction.
May 9, 2011 -
Re: The Tattoo Engineer - 1.1 (Revised)
Ohayou Violet! Former team member here to review :) I've put your story into spoilers, my comments are below paragraphs to give you a comment in specific places. I shake ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: we are the dead
Ohayou, I'm here to review, so let's get to it =). I've put your story into "spoiler" with my comments beneath paragraphs. He watched her letter burn in the darkness. ...
May 7, 2011
