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Re: Numbers - Ch1
Deleted from existence~
Oct 7, 2011 -
Re: Death Weapon Meister Academy *Started*
Vlad - DWMA's hallways "But what if something happens to you?! We are your partners, why can't we participiate?!" Maria complains to me with Catherina repeating her famous "Yeah!" as ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: Death Weapon Meister Academy *Started*
(I've added Vlad's weapons profiles and will start posting soon. I'm pilled under study atm)
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: Life is perfect
Hiya! Here as requested =) I've put your poem into the spoiler. Every step planned, every movement precise , like a perfectly executed dance. Nothing (is) out of place, out ...
Sep 30, 2011 -
Re: Death Weapon Meister Academy *Started*
Name: Yaroslav “Vlad” Vysockiy Age: 18 Gender: Male Type: Meister Rank: Second class student Partner: Anna and Catherine Black Appearance: Exactly as in the picture, he just doesn’t have any ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Charlie
Since the reviews before me nitpicked grammar, I'll focus more on the impression and the style of your work. The lines of descriptions you have... They kind of resemble a ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: First Light - Chapter One
Cheers! Let's get to it =) I've put your story into the spoiler along with my impressions, notes and corrections. Below the spoiler is my overall. Ela crawled through the ...
Sep 23, 2011 -
Re: The Review Bin
Hiya Isha! =) I've come here to ask for a favor - for a review :) Many thanks in advance! Best regards, ~Kyousuke
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: Rawwrr (Reopened!)
All 3 done.
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: Serpent's Teeth [3]
Now then, let's get it done. ‘...and then he told me to be ready to proceed at a moment’s notice and showed me out.’ - It's odd to start the ...
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: Serpent's Teeth [2]
Continuing right from the 1st chapter =) Same scheme. The piano stool scraped back across the floor as I stood up. ‘Are you out of your mind?’ I demanded. ‘To ...
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: Serpent's Teeth [1]
Hiya! =) I'll review all three when I get the time, for the time being let's get through this one. I've put my impressions, notes and the likes in the ...
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: Numbers - Prologue
Thanks a lot =) Editted and fixed.
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: Charlie II's WRFF Thread
Cheers! =) Here's the link : Thanks a lot in advance! =) Best regards, ~Kyousuke
Sep 22, 2011 -
Re: Numbers - Prologue
Many thanks to everybody who reviewed this work! It's such a disaster I'm going to delete it from its existence and make something from nothing!
Sep 22, 2011
