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I'm sorry you won't find my review really that great as for sure many others can write, I'm still new at it ^^ I'll go by the example of some ...

I have to admit I agree with people before me that this is a really great piece! I really liked to read it and I'd love to see your next ...

Thanks for the comment Ninett =) With a little bit better knowledge at writing poems I'll try to write another poem this week. I hope I won't mess it up ...

I've edited the first post =) I honestly hope It's better now.

I have to admit it's written nice. I imagined the mirror breaking, blood spilling, comparisons you wrote and so on. The only trouble is that it felt a bit a ...

I agree with both AquaMarine and Kamas, the repeating questions made me stop for a moment. The subject is interesting and despite the constant questions you wrote it well from ...

I had to reread it twice to understand the whole, but in the end, I'm quite amazed. That's a great piece of work about alcoholics, keep writing!

Thanks everybody for your opinions =) I've got a lot of subjects to study for, it's January, a lot of exams coming up, so I'll try my best to make ...

Hiya! Seeing that you haven't had this reviewed yet and I've got some time, I've tried reviewing it, so here goes. I've tried correcting a few places that repeat later ...

Heh xD Never heard that song or read another poetry about leaves. Anyway , point taken =) Once I'll feel like writing poetry again as a break from writing normal ...

Thanks a lot for the comment! I changed the last line in the first stanza, not much but should be better, I think ^^

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I'm not really good at correcting literal works so I'll simply tell my opinion as your work was already reviewed, I found the story pretty interesting, the idea is a ...

Points taken, thanks a lot =) I'll remember this well once I get to writing next piece, as for this Prologue, It was maybe a mistake but I made another ...

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