Wolferion

Cheers! I'd like to use the chance and ask you for a review once you feel like it =) Link is : Thanks ahead =) Have a nice day! Kyou

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Cheers ForestQueen! I shamefully do not have the time to review it all completely, so I'll add my overall opinion some time later. However, I managed to review your Prologue ...

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Thanks a lot to all of you =) I deleted one stanza and changed the very last phrase. It should stick to the main theme of the poem and I ...

Welcome to the YWS community =) Now I'm sorry but I'll be harsh. This seriously was one big 'description' telling. I say telling, because I barely sensed any 'show' element ...

First of all I'd like to welcome you to YWS community =) Now I'd get to the reviewing. I liked the stanzas of two verses you used, they rhymed well ...

Pretty much everything was said before me, so I'll skip to the stanza you added. I think it's a really good one and should be kept =) The words used, ...

I must agree with Tenyo. I'm a person that likes both styles, but this one bugged me quite a lot. It's got no structure, it's just lines. Good lines of ...

I kind of like the message you mean with this poem, however I was a bit bugged by the fact there's little punctuation and also I believe the same as ...

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Thank you Snoink and Elfwriter97 =) The same with the other poem, I'll try to revise this on the weekend with your advices ^^

Yes indeed ^^ You've hit the spot. I had to use a dictionary in order to find rhyming words, because it's kind of difficult for me to pull rhyming words ...

Cheers! I haven't spotted anything really bad about the poem except the fact that you do not use any dots or comas at all and that messes whole poem, you ...

Felt kind of deep and emotional, that's good ^^ The flow of text went good, I had no trouble reading it fluently except : They say you’ve used much too ...