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Re: Reviews back in action!
All done =) Waiting for more!
Jun 21, 2010 -
Re: Please Mommy
Cheers! Well, it looks like almost everything was already said heh. Anyway, I'd go and agree with the rest that the poem is good. I liked the way it was ...
Jun 21, 2010 -
Re: Donate $1 (US), get a bookmark!
I'll have to apologize as I won't be able to until I become 18 -_- My parents aren't willing to donate and I'm not adult yet to have a job. ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: *Repost Edit* Baby, I love you
Cheers! You might hear that this is kind of cliche, since 'love theme' is heavily overused lately, though there's that touch of 'yourself' in it and that's what we'll be ...
Jun 19, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart- Chapter-8
Cheers! So there it goes as asked =) I haven't read the previous chapters, so I'll do the role of a reader that grabbed a book and just to see ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Ben Franks On: Reviews [OPEN]
Cheers Ben Franks! Would like to ask for a review on a 2nd chapter of Sinful Pride as it's got no reviews and I think the fight is a bit ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Reviews back in action!
Forestqueen = Reviewed =) Shubhiloves2write : Not done yet, though I'm working on it ^^
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Excerpt from WWII Novel
Cheers! I won't go detailed about grammar here as you haven't edited your post yet and Stori has already mentioned the mistakes I've noticed too. As to about the story ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: Reviews back in action!
Flower~Child : Done =) Both reviewed. Shubhiloves2write : Sure =) I'll get to reviewing it a bit later, my eyes hurt ^^ Please bear with me a bit.
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Forgetting Part 2 (edited)
Gramar ,but I know I won't be here very long, - I think the 'for very long' is better, maybe even as far as 'for much longer'. He to has ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Forgetting (Edited)
Cheers! I've got a free lesson at school so I'll review this with the time I have left. I'll go through what didn't feel right first and then for the ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Reviews back in action!
Calligraphy : Reviewed ^^ Hope it helps. Flower~Child : I'll get to it once I come back from study, I have to leave in 10 minutes =) Sorry for the ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Today is one of those days - edited
Cheers! Haven't seen one of those in quite some time =) Well, basically the poem was done well, I didn't have to imagine anything complex and the scenery for me ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Sinful pride - Chapter 1
I'm really grateful for your review =) I was holding back a bit due to the one thing that's going to happen later in the story, but in the end ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Reviews back in action!
Cheers everybody! Has been some time since I last time stepped in here. Now I'm back and even more fired up to continue writing and also to review, of course. ...
Jun 14, 2010
