Wolfdaemon

very good, i love the story. u am, as i often admit, bad at grammar reviews, soo, i am just saying this on the story part, i REALLY liked it.

id read it :) i love tolkien.

i really liked it! nice style of writing!

by the way, the chapters are longer, so should i put it as a attachment or just post it?

thanks everyone! i will most likely post chap. 1 later today, its going pretty fast!

thanks, i am pretty sure i got all the things you suggested, shook things up a bit, scrambled and unscrambled :)

This is the beggining to my story :) I need to know what you think about it so i can better it. Thanks in advance! ~Prologue~ Bigger meanings Do you ...

i really liked it! i am horrid at reviews on grammer and whatnot. i really liked riley, i have an akita that sound like you discribed him as, excepts mine's ...

:!: i need help, again. its title troubles, the ALL IMPORTANT QUESTION. here are a few, which one do you like? persapolis- into the depths the wit whistlers shadowz sunfyre

i liked it!! i love the idea of hybrids, i have something like it in my story! i loved the different elements too!

okay, i im in a fix! i need to know if i should write a story in modern times or medieval! please help me!

i, for one, thought it was very good! larkin remind me of damen off of vampire diaries, who, is infact, my favorite. way cooler then stephan. no need to be ...

hi everyone! wolf here, i have this idea about two twins, i love the story, i was just wondering if YOU would read it. its set in medieval/futuristic settings, such ...

H! wolf here, i was just wondering if, like mine, your mc's have theme songs? I think Izzy's might be angel by within temptation, and Danni's is probably love me ...

that was very good! i would read more! sorry, i am not good at critique with grammar and what not. ha ha, kind of frightening though