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Re: Demigod
This is just my kind of fantasy. the, mythical, fantastical stuff that really sparks! i like the main character, i feel my mc and your mc would get along great ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: Bickazer's Corner
Sounds very intriguing. I rarely read those kinds of books, but i think i would probably pick up linked worlds from a shelf and read it! nice summary! lol, isn't ...
May 29, 2010 -
Re: My life as a human dreamcatcher Part 4
Hey! I enjoyed this story! For one, i feel our main characters would get along, lol, and the other because i loved how you ended it! Nice names too, i ...
May 14, 2010 -
Re: birdie birdie!!
mostly behavior. i really need how they act, fight, and the such. thanks!
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: birdie birdie!!
Hey! I need to pick your brains about birds of prey! kestrels, falcons, hawks, eagles, the like, please, i really need help!
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: Life's LIttle Lessons - Prologue
Hey! I really enjoyed this! I liked how you described the lady in white :) I'm sure other people on here can give you a more detailed critique on any ...
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: *Rohan* First Chapter.
I liked it! Hehe, the one thing about the story that got me was the names! They are a mouthful! I had a problem where i would make huge difficult ...
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: norse and greek mythology
darn, i knew i spelled it wrong, and i had JUST googled it lol! thanks a ton!
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: norse and greek mythology
okay, thanks! umm, i have two villains, jormundr and a giant eagle, but yeah, a villain from those, not hydra though :) ummm, i would like to know about the ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: norse and greek mythology
hey! i know quite a bit about mythology, especially Norse and Greek, but maybe you could help? i need info on norse and greek demigodsand lesser gods and some other ...
Mar 9, 2010 -
Re: (Part 2)
i really liked this! i am terrible at reviews on grammar and what not, so i am just saying this about the story ;) i read it through and was ...
Feb 24, 2010 -
Re: its finally here!
ummm, this isnt a full chapter, this is the SECOND HALF of a chapter. thanks for the review.
Feb 19, 2010 -
Re: its finally here!
this really needs critique, its one of my shortest chapters!
Feb 19, 2010 -
Re: its finally here!
okay, this is the second part of my first chapter, oh gosh, i am terified to post! never gets easier! sorry about the font and stuff, it doesnt show up ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: chap. 1 part 1 of (name pending)
lol, thanks, i didnt even notice those typos! thanks i will fix them, this chapter is my shortest, i am still revising the second half :) thanks! wolf ps: bad ...
Feb 14, 2010
