Wolfdaemon

Hi! I truly believe this story has a lot of potential, just slow up a bit, i was like, whoa, already over? Describe the school, the people around her, her ...

Hi! I really enjoyed this, lol, i love dragons too, actually i wrote a novel about them when i was your age. I mean, it was terrible, a lot of ...

This was very intriguing! when i figured out she was trying to commit suicide i was like :O lol. I loved her sisters character ;) , maybe because she reminded ...

This was a very interesting story! I agree with the above post, lol, i am a sucker for animal stories, its true, so of course i loved this story! swiftsoar ...

I liked it! Of course, this is my type of novel! Female warriors, sword wielding heroine's = awesomeness! My only advice would be to maybe explain a little better, hint ...

Amazing! Amazing description, amazing story, i just loved it and its dictionary of words! I had a problem a couple years ago where i would throw completely useless words into ...

Hi! Okay, question, have you read Darkly Dreaming Dexter or seen it on TV(simply 'Dexter' on TV)? Very similar thing here, serial killer killing bad guys, obsessed with blood, and ...

Lol, I cant wait for more!

Hey! long time no see! As usual, i love your writing, and you've gotten so much better! Didn't think it possible, with how well you wrote before ;) Catchy name ...

This really fascinated me, to say the least! My favorite part had to be the beginning ;) my only suggestion would be to put something between when the scenes switch ...

;) thanks! okay, i have a dilemma actually. i changed Jensen's age to 16-17 to make the range of readers higher, and this makes her seem younger, so i am ...

As usually, this was very interesting...and exciting ;) maybe give more description of the Blondie and the brunette (-ey) girls. just a suggestion. It would be good either way, one ...

Hey Tori ;) Me...again. as usual, i loved it. some minor spelling mistakes but nothing life threatening...well, for you anyway. iris maybe. Very clever with the pink Sobe, i love ...

Hi! great story ;) it really caught my eye, i have a feeling i read this before, did you post it awhile back? hmmm. well anyway, the only major prob. ...

lol, forgot about points ;) Im here waiting for you next post, holding my breath!