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Re: Wasted
No more lies that Were surprisingly true Take away everything That reminds me Of you Want my opinion?, ok, I'll give it to you just this once. Reconstruct a whole ...
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Re: What is love and what's it for?
Another heartbreak song........who would have guessed? and don't say I'm patronizing. There's a difference between cruelty and truth. want to know what love is......I know. Love is not what you're ...
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Re: For Your Return
another heartbreak written into song. I believe there will be a day when heartbreak songs are a thing of the past. They are very difficult to make sound original. and ...
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Re: evening star
short, sweet, simple. A perfect poem for a middle school literature book. Maybe with a small illustration above the caption. A picture of a young girl asleep in a hammock ...
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Re: The Prelude
What if everything you mentioned is your own false encouragement? what if there is no reason or God? what if everything we believed was just conditioned upon us? imagine a ...
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Re: the unknown
I understand it's not what it's about. But everyone will have their own perception. Wasn't trying to attack or criticize, sorry if it sounded that way.
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Re: Depth
Heartbreak, possibly? you have rhythmic sense and a lynical way of writing, and the darkness is good. Darkness within writing seems to be huge outlet for creativity. BUT who are ...
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Re: the unknown
What is this seem to be? What does it mean? What does it want? What does it need from me? I know, PEER EVALUATION........I don't know what everyone else is ...
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Re: Fact
There are 31.7 million seconds in a year There were 40 million lives lost in WWI 60 million in WWII A B-2 bomber cost upwards of $2.2 billion to produce ...
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Re: Being A Non-Writer
reminds me of English class in 9th grade, freshman year of high school, when my teacher wanted us to write a short poem or story about anything. She asked us ...
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Re: strange and funny rap
haha, made me smile. A little childish though. when you mention "I know how to make things fun" you should reply something like "I sexually satisfy the nun" just to ...
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Re: Curiousity And The Catharsis
says your age is 12. For such a young age you have a very sophisticated and educated vocabulary. your first verse has a very melodic sense to it, but the ...
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Re: Somewhere Between The Wind and The Shine
The Cold shiver of getting into Bed A lost thought running out of my head Somewhere between the wind and the shine You're in me You're all mine And Everyting ...
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Re: A Road Without End
Their infection clouds the discernment of what’s fake and what’s real. maybe the best line you had going there, by my standards anyhow. They move like a deadly virus, waiting ...
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Re: SpiderBite Beach
so you have a teddybear in a letter? must be a very tiny teddybear or a very large letter. Either one, I don't find many spiders at the beach, maybe ...
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