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I agree with the name bit, it's just that can't think of anything that'll fit this clockwork kid :3

Thanks! I was so worried that it'd come out sort of weird ^^" But sure, I'll take a look at your works :)

Wow, thanks! (Can't believe I missed the typo, hehe!)

Thank you! ^^

The 16 was a mistake, but now I don't know how to take it off D: But I guess there's minor bits of details - such as when Madeline first ...

Woah - his MOM? Ahahahahaha, whoops, my bad! xD

I had no idea how to slip in Con's fear, but I can see how it would make the whole situation a lot more realistic. Thank you! ( ^ U ...

To be honest, I didn't revise it at all - I had no idea where to start! I'm going to have to soon. Anyway, thanks for pointing out all these ...

Thank you for the review (and sorry for replying late!) I can't believe I missed the choppiness - I mean, eight? I should've seen that earlier, so thanks for pointing ...

Thank you for the review! I had no idea how to introduce the characters properly with the situation at hand, but I was able to broaden the description in the ...

Thank you for the review! It really helped me edit this chapter :)

Thank you so much for the review! After rereading this, I realized that the beginning didn't really give too much on why they were shunning each other, so I went ...

Thank you for the review! I completely missed that part with"Victor" (since that was supposed to be Will's original name)! I also saw right through the consistency, so thanks for ...

Aww, thank you! :D