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  • Poetry » Satire, Dramatic Re: The Boy Who hated Lefties

    Well this was cute, really! I found it sort of humorous how left and right handed was compared to homosexuality, and how our fellow protagonist learned that hands are hands, ...

    Nov 9, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Delete

    I really liked this short little story - it captures the good ol' childhood memories and fun times with imagination, but it also blantly views how over time, people sort ...

    Nov 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Other Re: Decisions

    Wow, this was... emotional. I loved how you tiptoed onto the subject (as BowTiesAreCool said, this subject is really sensitive) but you seemed to have pulled it off just fine. ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Why the Clouds Go By

    Nicely done, these are questions no really asks but is always thinking - it's quite insightful, and has some neat philosophy :) Though, did the poem move from aabb to ...

    Jul 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Fantasy Re: The Teal Ribbon

    I feel like this was some kind of awesome mix between some horror mystery to paranormal romance. I have no idea xD Either way, I'm so... intrigued, by this! The ...

    Jul 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Ha gayyy!

    When I first saw the title, I had some odd curiosity that made me want to immediately see what this was - and I'm glad I did! Emotion ran throughout ...

    Jul 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: The Ugly Duckling

    This was an amazing retelling of The Ugly Duckling! I was blown away by how you described the story, much like a child's storybook would, and still managed to get ...

    Jul 22, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Silent Game

    Well, this was... sad. Poor girl. To start off, I like how you you abstractly introduced the situation at the beginning of the story, but I suggest that, as Valhalla ...

    Jul 21, 2014
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: That Summer

    Hey! (My first review, woo-hoo!) The first thing I'd like to say: lovely twist. I really didn't see that coming, and apparently others haven't either - kudos to you for ...

    Jul 21, 2014


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