WinterGrimm

Actually I have seen part of the sex tape. What? I was bored. At least part of it. I don't recomend it. It was pretty boring. As if there were ...

I fall in love too fast it’s a scientific fact that my heart falls into my chest when I see her walk by. The circles of her hips creates an ...

Love for sake of love? Perhaps. Do not look upon my sad and miserable heart do not look with pity for the within the blackness there holds a bit of ...

I traveled down the interstellar highway I wanted to see you on the other side. You with hips like planets, and eyes like starstuff radiant in aurora fire Solarflares of ...

Lotsa good grammar tips and such here.

2. “I can’t believe you talked me into this.” Thomas moaned from behind the wheel of his parent’s brand new 2004 Dodge Grand Caravan. Cherry red. Just waxed. Super-clean interior. ...

Thank you for this critique. I will go through and make grammar corrections forthwidth (meaning when I have time.) To be honest this story thus far is long short story ...

Ok, I have a few things to say so I'm going to say them. Have you ever heard of the platapus theory of proving god doesn't exist? Yeah well its ...

Road Trip 1. The shadowy grass made a wet squish with each step. Thomas followed Rocky as they crossed the soccer field. “So,” Thomas said. “Where exactly are we going?” ...

8. Marie was surprised that Jason stopped involving himself when she came into contact with Hana. That feeling faded less that a second later when her mind merged with Hana’s. ...

7. “—There’s nothing you can do about it.” Hana replied. “You’re wrong. There is always something that can be done.” Jason said, nearly at the same time Marie said much ...

Each time it was re-told, the details grew more exaggerated, until the dead trio had been drug through the bars and savagely beaten, dying when their brains splattered on the ...

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they black the sky black isn't really working for me as a verb. blacken the sky? when on of my sex not of my sex one of my sex? filling ...

I'd just like to start off by saying that this is honestly one of the best pieces of fiction I've seen on this site. Its clever, its clear, its vitually ...