Wildspark

Thanks lol

I'm glad that you liked it haha.

Thanks for the help and I'm glad that you liked it.

Okay, I fix the things that you mentioned. Thanks for the advice

Thanks and it's okay haha

Thanks haha :)

Thanks for the critique

Thanks for the critique

I didn't realize that I changed the tense. Thanks for pointing that out. I actually like writing dark stories, but I wanted to try something different for once haha.

Thanks, I decided to change that line.