Wiggy

Thanks guys. You all rock. :D I'll prolly end up scrapping the third stanza or just rewriting it so at least there's some bridge between the second and fourth stanzas.

What's that? -Fineena Is that a new British type of waistcoat? -Patrick Give me liberty or give me...

Wiggy, dear. Write, please. I'm bursting to get out! I want to be with Peter. :D Fineena Fineena, I'm motivated! I'm going, I'm going. Be patient-if you can. ;) Wiggy ...

That is a GREAT idea!!!!! Thanks for the input shadow. :D I'll totally use it! Wiggy ;)

Ireland. My home, my country-what more can I say? Who I love most though-of course that is Peter. But will he ever know? It's so hard...and of course my family, ...

In a sort of way. My art is writing. *sighs* I just hope Peter's boss doesn't find out about the newspaper articles. I would be fired, and worse, my dear ...

I like the story so far! I suggest separating your paragraphs-makes for an easier read. :D

Loved the interjectioned thoughts. You had awesome description, and here's a hearty congrats on a great job!

Pri to the o!!!! How's it goin' in your neck of the woods? I see it's been awhile since ya joined-how do you like it? Hopefully you'll have found it ...

Heya devil! :D I'm guessing you like dark mysteries...I love mysteries too, but historical fiction is my favorite. What do you like to write? I'm really glad you're here!!!!!! *huggles* ...

Hey Jazzie!!! I'm Wiggy, current insane member of YWS. I love this place because of the awesome people, great crits, and just all around amazing community here! I'm sure in ...

Look at the people around you. Take random names from restaurants. :D

I liked this a lot. Cute story, great characters, and everyone else already critted what I wanted to say. :D

I have the weird ability to remember my dreams constantly. Some of them are plain grand, such as of a free Ireland, but others are horrible, like the one that ...

Be hurt. I've seen others hurt enough by those blasted English. I can't bear to see anyone else who's weaker getting hurt by those scum. -Fineena Have you ever seen ...