Wiggy

That was awesome! It was one of those that made me feel all warm and fuzzy like I wanted to hug a teddy bear. *hugs bear* Good job!

Rock on sur! :D

Save up for Russia. Get my driver's permit THIS MONTH. Tell a certain person I love him. :oops: Pray more. Get a flat stomach. Get an overall grade of A ...

Made me think of grasshopper for some reason. As I know what your story is about, though, I can't really give a fair judgment because I loved your story! I ...

Revising and all? Awesome!

Endings are great. I just hate the ones that don't satisfactorily wrap up the story. But hey, that's what epilogues are for! I used to skip to the endings, but ...

Granted, but it's now an outside class and you freeze your butt off cause it's winter! I wish I could sleep.

"Self-degradation" popped into my head immediately. Makes me think of something angsty, and as I'm not the type for that, prolly wouldn't be interested too much. Inscription of Love

I would do something that has kind of a subtle theme, but is integral to the story plot. Really, all of the suggestions here have taken care of what normal ...

I'm guessing this meant something about lost youth? I think the images of bugs and newts and such was overused too much, but then again, it helped keep the poem ...

Green, of course! -Fineena What does your country's flag look like?

Well, it's straightforward to say in the least! No doubt about that! :P First off, this seemed more of a statement than of a poem. To me, it didn't seem ...

It's a very run-on piece. I think you have a good idea here, but I think you need to work on not having so many run-on sentences in your poem. ...

Reminds me of a cauldron with magic. Sort of like the black cauldron. lol I don't think I'd personally pick it up, but then again I'm not a great judger ...

Granted, but now the rest of math doesn't! (hehe- gotcha :twisted:) I wish I had a cell phone.