Wiggy

Also, one line break is a/iconic. I think it would properly be an/iconic. That's the only thing I noticed! Other than that, absolutely brilliant. You have such talent with weaving ...

First or third most definitely. When I read some of your story I'll help you more even then! ;) Also, I find that there's sometimes a brilliant choice phrase in ...

OMG I love this story!!!!!! You're so talented at everything Jacko!!!!! Geez, from dramatic poetry to fanfic you've got it all! *applauds* Wiggy ;) P.S. Can't wait for more! :D

Loved it Jacko! I felt the excitement and tension throughout the whole narrative...brilliant job! :D Wiggy ;)

I agree with Snoink. The paper seemed to wander a bit and I think you need to center in on one point. Find an odd angle that would be enticing, ...

I love 'em, especially the dance ones!!!!! I take dance meself. Cal, you're my hero! :D Wiggy ;)

Texas rocks. My friend lives in Allan, Texas. I'm Wiggy and I'm realllllly glad you're here!!!!!!!! *huggles* I'm known as the current insane member of YWS (just ask anybody ) ...

Hey blazing! Priv'yet! Nice to meet ya. :D I'm reaallly glad that you decided to join YWS. You'll be well-rewarded with fellowship, friendly and helpful critiques, and smothered by huggles ...

Jacko!!!!!! Hey man! I commented in your blog, but I'll reintroduce myself here. I'm Wiggy, current insane member of YWS! (Trust me-I'm known for it. :D) I'm reeeeally glad you're ...

I know what you mean aero. :D I'm sooo sorry I haven't done the crit yet. OMG seriously I hate chemistry!!!!! I've got a test that I have to go ...

This was a pretty good poem. There were a couple of things I noticed though: Since in the six months that you've been gone you haven't written once, This line ...

This really reminds me of the story "Spud" or whatever it was called that Snoink posted from TYWS...yeesh.

Am I being maltreated? :P

I'm still having trouble changing my username to the greeter's color. And I've already done that thing where you go in your profile and change it to "Greeters" instead of ...

Hey Remember!!!!!!! I love your avvie and your name. :D Btw, I'm Wiggy, current insane, random, always hyper...Wiggy lol. It's great you're here and I really hope that you have ...