Whitedwarf3821

Their house sounds really cool. I love hideaways and banana seat bikes Yay! awesome story so far :D

Please write more i need to know more about judah . is he a singer or something . But i like ur story so far its really good 8)

I like ur story alot . It intrigs me and makes me want to read more . Like other people said some grammer errors . but u can always edit ...

i liked it . but u do need to go back and edit some parts . u have some spelling error . but other than that it was really good ...

Thanx for the review and comments please read it again cause i have reedited it and i think it sounds alot better . But there are still place i have ...

I think it was really good . But you need to add some words in places and other places you don't need some of the words. It was reall good ...

This is the second part to ch1 in Kaelynne's LOve Story! "Okay I don’t mind. I want to meet your friend. But I'm gonna bring you a lunch tomorrow. No ...

I loved it . you gave a great description of the rain and you used litery terms. Your whole thing was wonderful . I can't believe your only 13 good ...

Chapter 1 My name is Kaelynne Marie Caley, I’m Fifteen years old ,I'm a freshman at Eaton High school. I have Pale blue eyes and golden blonde hair down to ...

[color=#80FF40]I really liked it. The characters you created seemed like the type of people i would want as my friends. I think the way you had cecilia and tisha bonded ...