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i think it is good definetly continue writing this

I love this story Lillian its so cute :)

I really liked it . Your stiry reminds me of Kyle XY and I absolutely love that show. But it was also not like Kyle XY . I really loved ...

I think it is a great story . I'm sorry that it is true . Break ups are extremly hard but you did a good job and I felt like ...

Freshmen year is said to be the hardest. Most go to a different school and may get lost . Freshman year was a total disaster. The beginning was okay . ...

very good and supenseful . You definetly should continue .

I really liked it it was a good description of how people feel when leaving the one they love. It kind of makes me sad too because in like 2 ...

I thought this was a really sweet story and I love that you incorporated Bible scripture. It didn't make sense to me until the end . Really lieks it.

Love yout story very interesting can't wait to read more !!!!!

Such a cut e story definitly continue writing this it sounds so sweer . I love romance stories they make me remember special events in my life. :)

Ch 2 Part 2 Chris then shows her the upstairs bathroom. The bathroom has a tall shower with different types of showerheads. Then there is also a Jacuzzi tub. The ...

Chapter 2 When Chris brings Kaelynne Back to his house she is amazed and totally shocked because his house is not what she would have imagined. Chris’ house is an ...

I like ur story . It is not the tipical vampire or witch story. But u do need some more interesting things to happen not much happened and the lumeni ...

Yay they are alright. and he gets to got home and see his family. I would want to go home and see family too after a fire that happened in ...

i'm confused . is that her ancestory . Also that was really weird but in a good way. :) :mrgreen: :mrgreen: