WhiteTiger93

**Don't worry so much! :) You're doing fine! Don't God-mod her (which you haven't!) and it'll be alright. It's not hard to get Kayla's personality anyway. (; Don't worry so ...

Millie "The necklace is beautiful," she gasped, smiling. Millie loved pretty things. Some would call her a girly-girl, but it wasn't that. She just loved any sorts of jewerly. This ...

Elijah He couldn't help it. Something in him just made him let go. He didn't even feel bad that he was getting sick right in this man's home. "No," Eli ...

Oooh! I'll save a spot for a sweet damsel in distress. It'll be fun to write from that point of veiw. :D

Elijah Elijah watched an older looking lady leave the estate he was walking up to. She eyed him, almost as if recognizing him, and went on her way. Eli smiled ...

Elijah Eli felt wonderful today. In fact, his father's ship was now docking in Haven. The morning breeze was blowing at the perfect temperature around him and once he delivered ...

BRYSTIANNE and NUKPANO She hated it. She wished that Nuk would come to her and apologize. Or at least they both would apologize. If he could do it, then she ...

Hey, can someone please bring in Crystal? :) I would totally appreciate it. I've tried twice now but people are just skipping right over it. (;

Bethany grinned. "Dunking under the rules? Sounds like my kind of plan!" She said, excitedly. "So where do you want to go then?" Maria asks. The girl looked a little ...

Ranger you're so pretty! And your smile is nice. :) And I'm very jealous of your gorgeous hair! :lol:

Sorry Griffin! I put the known associates in! :D And while I was reading through the others, I noted nobody seemed to like Eli. I can't seem to understand why? ...

Everyone is just flat out stunning. Me = major jealous. =D Awesome tattoo, Matt! I can't wait until I turn 18 so I can get one! :lol:

Wow! Thank you both for your critiques. You've both given me a lot to work with! :) What time period is this? This is made in the time period right ...

Hey Knightley! :) I'd love for you to reveiw this and I'd be so grateful! Genre: General Fiction Title: Golden Souls (part 1) Link:

Clouds of iron gray huddled together in the sky over a small town. It was empty except for the occasional shopper who clutched his jacket close and cast worried glances ...