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Re: [deleted]
I actually really like this. It is an interesting story idea, and apart from the minor grammatical errors (I won't go into detail, almost all were given my the others) ...
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Re: Inalienable Chapter 1
Hmm, interesting points. Thanks. There is a reason though that she didn't read Lucas' freind's minds. She also didn't read Lucas's mind. She doesn't like too. She only does it ...
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Re: Inalienable Chapter 1
Prologue A sink dripped in the distance, and the pitch black room smelled of mildew. I blinked repeatedly but my eyes were still unused to the unusal darkness around me. ...
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Re: Cut & Paste
Name: Charlotte Age: 16 DNA shared with: Eagle Gender: Female Appearance: Long, soft brown hair, with a almost feather-like look. Piercing blue eyes and a small build all around. Muscular ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Yay! I've been born into the YWS world!
Hey y. I'm White Tiger. I'm some what new too. I'm really enjoying it here so far and everyone is so incredibly nice. I'd love to hear some of your ...
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Re: I'm new.
Thanks! I'll definitely look into those groups. Thank you, again, for all the information. I'm really enjoying it here. Oh and I have posted one poem (I admit it's not ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Play On.
I like this alot. As soon as I started reading this I felt a sort of...comfortable atmosphere. Your character seems deep, smart and interesting. It's hard to portray charaxters as ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Purple Magic: Chapter 1
I actually like this. Fantasy fiction is my favorite type of writing and I'm very picky, but I would read this. It's interesting and leaves you waiting for the next ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Inalienable
Thank you! I'll definetely work on my grammar more. I promise you, it's normally not that bad. I wrote this last night but I had to get it down. The ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Inalienable
Prologue A sink was dripping in the distance and the pitch black room smelled of mildew. I blinked repeatedly but my eyes were still weak from the attack. I tried ...
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Re: Untitled
Oh I know. I don't want this to be published. This is my first poem up. I wanted to put something...sentimental up first. I just wanted to see what everyone ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Plz suggest a book
Well I'll tell you some of my all time favorites: The Named The Dark all by and Marianne Curley The Key Night World by L.J. Smith Trickster's Choice by Tamora ...
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Re: Ink Catcher
This was very interseting, and very good. Oh, and bonus points for originality. I've never heard anything like this...and yes I mean that in a good way. The only thing ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
That's actually a really good point. I completely agree. I already know it sucked because I did write it for myself and not an audience. When I wrote it I ...
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Re: Untitled
There's nothing for me here Nothing but hate, smiles, lies and tears I laugh, I love to hide my pain But no one cares to really see Depression sinks deep, ...
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