WhiteTiger93

oops, I didn't see your writing, should I change mine?

Charlotte I stood dumbfounded and out of the way. What was going on. I eyed Jesse. Whitney shook her head at me, almost imperceptively, and stood beside Jesse. Did Whitney ...

***Okay, so I wrote Saved, orignally as a short story, but so many of my comments told me to continue it. That made me feel good and your reveiw were ...

Charlotte "I have to pee!" I practically yelled at the guard. "Yes, I know, you've told me a hundred times," the guard said. "You're not leaving your cell." "I don't ...

hmmm, I like the story. I like it a lot. The reason for this is because he seems arrogant. When a lot of people write - myself included - they ...

** sorry MJ. haha. I'm incredibly tired and I was just writing crap. The only reason I was still on was because I couldn't fall asleep. Didn't mean to be ...

Name: Crystine Marshall Age: 16 Gender: Female School: English, transferred to America Apperance: Likes: To have fun. Too much fun. Parties and hanging out with freinds. Reading. Dislikes: Fake people

aw. I'm sorry you didn't like it. I love sad stories because real life isn't perfect and not everything has a happily ever after. I know that most people don't ...

Charlotte I sat in the gym. I had collapsed earlier and gotten the heck out of there before anyone saw me. I sat alone, as usual. A girl growled near ...

hmm...when are we going to start it? I'm so excited and ready to post.

Charlotte Everyone was talking about John. I winced as I watched him being dragged by the van. I ran outside the gym. I couldn't just stand there and watch. "Hey ...

Charlotte What was Whitney doing? I hoped she was okay. I stopped. We were only in this to escape. I couldn't grow close to another partial. It would only cause ...

Edit: Sorry I made two ):

Name: Brystine Age: 16 School: Phoenix Power: Shadow She can blend into the shawdows, like she is a shadow herself. Can use shadows to trap people, and as a weapon-like ...

Charlotte It was one of the guards. Whitney and I tried to look casual but that only made me look more suspicious. Whitney was a better actress than I "What's ...