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Re: Cut & Paste
** I won't be able to get on for a couple of days. You can still talk to my character and keep her active etc, and I'll try to get ...
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Re: Saved (part 2)
Thanks a lot. I thought that this was about to be torn to shreds ha ha. I can do better than this, but I'm siked to continue. Unfortunately, I have ...
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Re: Cut & Paste
Charlotte I bit my lip. So she did care what would happen to me. I could help them a lot, after all I could fly, but was it worth the ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: Will you survive?
Caidlene "Caidy," my sister croaked. I awoke and stood up next to her. "What? What is it?" I asked. "M-my stomach hurts. My feet hurts. EVERYTHING hurts!" She screamed. I ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: Cut & Paste
Charlotte I felt horrible about my previous actions. I could only image what was happening to Jesse. I just hoped she was okay. I could only think about saving ourselves ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: Cut & Paste
Charlotte For now we had to stick together. That was fine by me, I had been alone most of my life alone and it was nice to have someone who ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: Will you survive?
Caidlene She heard screaming in the room beside her. She jumped up and ran to the room next to her. It was her sister, Mina. "Sissy," she said hoarsely. "What ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: Cut & Paste
Charlotte "Wait Cam," I said. She turned to look at me. "I can carry light animals without the slighest bit of trouble. I'm strong. I'll carry Stanley." She looked me ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: Will you survive?
okay. got it. :D Sorry, I can be a bit slow to get some things. Well, I really like it so far, but shouldn't there be a visible sign. Lke ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: <Untitled Prologue>
I would just like to say well done. I really liked how you started it out with a lot of desciption and such. It caught me at the very begining. ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: Will you survive?
I like most of them, the only one I have a question about is number 6. Why would you get pains in your stomach, but want to eat? I'm not ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: When Did All This Happen? (Preface)
Okay, I am going to be brutally honest with you. I really didn't like it. I think that the writing needs some work as does the story line. “Moll? You ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: Inalienable Chapter 1 (I made revisions!)
Rubin: Oh No! Please don't tell me it sounds like...that book. Ugh, it is like the anti-christ. I absolutely hate Twilight. Well, I'll be sure to PM you when the ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: Cut & Paste
Charlotte This was it I was escaping! Freedom! I could almost feel it. I owed Whitney big time and I felt a little guilt at not trusting Jesse. I thought ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: Hello
Wow. This freind of yours sounds amazing. Gosh I would love to be her, I mean how great can she be. I'll bet she's like a genius of something. :wink: ...
Apr 11, 2009
