WhiteTiger93

Well, everyone got all of your grammatical errors, but after reading this, I couldn't just skip over it. I loved it. I understand that this is a prologue and it's ...

“Ian I can’t get down!” Kali yelled from the highest branch of the oak tree. “Yes you can. Just go down one branch at a time,” he replied. “What if ...

I thought that this was pretty good. It's intriguing, which is good(Duh). (: There weren't too many grammatical errors, but I'm not very good at catching them. Everyone else got ...

Well, this was interesting. (: It caught my attention at once ad kept me there. The begining kind of confused me, but I figured it out after re-reading it. I ...

Charlotte I didn't really know Josh that well, but if Whitney really trust him so I agreed. I watched her leave the room and sighed. I lay across her bed, ...

Thanks! I'll definitely revise it. What I was trying to say was that Ian agreed with Breanne. He believes he killed her sister but I get what your saying. It ...

I'm in! Name: Kasandra *Kassie* Age:17 Gender: Female Apperance: Short and slender. Short, choppy black hair and blue highlights. Blue-green eyes. Personality: Fun-loving. Always making a joke and har

Okay, first things fisrt. This is your best peice of writing Shella. It's better than the stroy you let me read in class and certainly more orignal. Thank God it's ...

Charlotte I was exhausted. I immediately found a room and collapsed on the cloud like bed. I cradled my aching head on the pillow. I had so many questions. Whitney's ...

Madison ~ District 1 "Melissa Carson," a voice rang out for the girls. I looked at the trembling little girl and smiled. It would be too easy to persuade her ...

Charlotte We transformed in the alley. I was horrified to realize that my feathers were partly blonde and partly brown. I sighed. I had always loved my natural brown color. ...

Charlotte "Well either way we're in danger," I said. "They will be here in a couple of days." "What are we going to do then?" Whitney asked. "I say that ...

Name: Madison Johnston Gender: Female Age: 16 Occupation: Tribute Appeance: Long black hair the reaches her middle back. Wavy, and usually lets it hang free. Blue-green eyes that are freindly ...

Caidlene "Caidy, come here," my sister whispered. "I'm right here," I said. I stroked her face. "I'll stay here as long as you want me here." "Then go," she whispered. ...

Charlotte "I don't know," I said. "But it's better than going to a foster home. I'm sorry, but no matter what we do, we'll never be normal teenagers. Sorry John." ...