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Remarks and other add-ins are in braces: David sat in the garden, playing with his ball. It was getting late, and the moon was shining brightly. “David McDonald, come inside ...

If anyone's wondering how to pronounce alien words, let me know. I can give out translations and pronunciations. Of the Lands of Ray and Hammer , Segment 5, "Chosen": Weeks ...

Comments, corrections, or add-ins are in braces. “What about stars? What are stars like?” Casey shoved him playfully{,} “You asked me that already. Gimme a new one.” Brian shrugged and ...

I allowed you to be my friend after this review. All of my added stuff is in braces. Dear Diary, I’m {Contractions should be avoided in formal writing. This is ...

If anyone's wondering how to pronounce alien words, let me know. I can give out translations and pronunciations. Of the Lands of Ray and Hammer , Segment 4, "Joined": Lydighet ...

First off, I would like to say that I don't understand why you would want to post something if you thought it was “raw.” (I have confidence though that I ...

Remarks/add-ins are in braces: Good morning{,} teachers and fellow students. My name is Kelsey Howlett{.} {T}oday I {will speak to you} about the school shootings that have taken place in ...

Of the Lands of Ray and Hammer , Segment 3, "Urchin": As the day's tasks came to a close, Lydighet departed from the Usikkers. Pamaus insisted that Lydighet stay for ...

Some of the remarks are for style. Others are for added or needed clarity. These remarks are in braces. Prologue {} January 23, 2950{;} 1400{ }h{ours;} Earth, Milky Way Galaxy ...

Hi, Mr. Badbear! Comments, edits, or other offered documentation is set in braces. I also may use strike marks. There w{ere} a series of events that led to Lord Isaac’s ...

Of the Lands of Ray and Hammer , Segment 2, "In Foresight": When he rose from slumber the following morning, Lydighet's thoughts still dwelt on the village's decision. Face and ...

Added material is in brackets (well, I might put in a few strike marks.): Half frozen to death on the tundra, a gentle voice whispered in his ear. He was ...

My additions, comments, or corrections are in braces: The arctic winds blew fiercely against a slow moving figure, threatening to beat him down into the frozen terrain. But the wind’s ...

Remarks or corrections are within the braces/{}. Katharine rolled down the window. She herself {This is odd. In could be something like this: Even with the cold, air-conditioned air blasting ...

I'm not sure if I'm just supposed to say if I like it or not or if I'm supposed to critique or help edit grammar and style. I'm going for ...