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Re: A Prayer
I tried to read between the lines, but I ended up loving it just same, even though I don't get it. awesome. Much love AliceXoxoxo
Aug 31, 2006 -
Re: Myspace!
I heart Myspace here's mine. xD
Aug 31, 2006 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here (4)
Tis me with my new hair xD
Aug 31, 2006 -
Re: Untitled about London bombings
Personally, I didn't think I was making a political statement with this peice, strictly trying to convey the inhumanity the men possessed. I also was trying to look at the ...
Aug 31, 2006 -
Re: The Mechanics
Thank you very much, I do write very sad and dark prose I admit, but If a piece of writing moves you to laughter or to tears, I think that's ...
Aug 31, 2006 -
Re: To forgive, divine
It seems so true. Beautiful description, nice work. Much love AliceXoxoxo
Aug 31, 2006 -
Re: not even a farewell
I love the concept. It's like you bled all over the page. I don't think I can really comment on the choice of words in poetry like this, it feels ...
Aug 31, 2006 -
Re: Lusting in the Backseat of a Car (R)
That's hot. (Oops that's Paris Hilton's catchphrase) Oh well I just stole it. 8) AliceXoxoxo
Aug 31, 2006 -
Re: Almond Eyes Wants To Fly
I liked it. It was touching and very realistic sounding. Some of the sentences fell over each other and became confusing though, at times I wasn't sure what I was ...
Aug 22, 2006 -
Re: I haven't written in a long time.
This is my latest effort, it's not my best work by far I feel I have lost something important in my skill, I took months off to discover what it ...
Aug 21, 2006 -
Re: YWS Needs A Mascot!
I think it should be an owl! :)
May 13, 2006 -
Re: Steinbeck
In my opinion a genius, Im reading Grapes Of Wrath at the moment and have already read Cannery Row and Of Mice and Men.
Apr 25, 2006 -
Re: That unexpected kiss
Beautiful, I love this. "You revealed your love for me I’m taken by the metal droplets And the acidic taste of rain Leaden fingers on my hips, I taste You ...
Apr 23, 2006 -
Re: The still of night
This is a lovely idea I like this: "Darkness shall leave as nature awakens, For light takes over and remains forsaken. The chapter shall close and open its gates, another ...
Apr 20, 2006 -
Re: A lack of color...
Nice imagery, was the theme inspired by the song by death cab for cutie "A lack of colour" ? I agree with the girl who fates loves, that verse doesn't ...
Apr 20, 2006
