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Hey there :) I have to ask how long you worked on this? It's an amazing piece, but it seems like it needs one or two revisions. I love the ...

Ello! Right, first, you should cut out that little note at the beginning. Have confidence in your own work! That, and telling people you wrote this in ten minutes will ...

Benji looked around, hoping he wouldn't have to be the one to break the silence. 'I'm Benji,' he introduced himself. 'Starsign Aries, blood type A, highschool student, pizza delivery boy, ...

School was turning out to be much harder than anticipated. The hallways where a mass of nonsensical sounds and words. In his english classes at home he was a genius. ...

Hey, can I be a bad guy? Name: Belle Glazier Persona: She's self confident and very practical. She never does anything unless she has something to gain, and doesn't mind ...

Name: Sebastian Moreno Age: 13 Gender: Male Grade: 7th Appearance: Longish black hair, really dark eyes, tanned skin. He tends to dress casually smart, in or outside school. Personality: He's ...

I've noticed this one. People seem to be intimidated by the idea of puppeting someone else's character. Storybooks tend to die quite quick when everyone is waiting for everyone else's ...

You know you're a writer when you read fourteen pages of 'you know you're a writer's, and the main character of the story you're *supposed* to be writing is still ...

Harsh Critique? I think I could give my inner editor a runabout. I do really like this piece, it scared me a bit at a few points. I don't know ...

I quite like this one, it made me smile too. It's simple, but, how do I explain. I think, pretty, would be the word. I like it as it is, ...

Funky Writing Stratagies... This sounds like a fun one. Write a sentence, get a jellybean. Write a paragraph, get two jellybeans. Write a page, get a muffin. Write 5,000 words, ...

Find an author who's style you like and nick their names. Most of my character names come from disney classics and shakespeare.

Write at least ten outcomes to the same situation before you decide what happens next.

Have you tried picking people you know and thinking about what they would right? Like, imagine your teachers as kids and put them in this school, or normalise famous action ...

It suddenly occured to Benji that two months away from home was a long time, especially considering he'd never been away for longer than a five day camping trip with ...