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Re: We Suddenly Found Ourselves Looking Up
wow. That's powerful. Kind of short, and has a few errors, but still really good. Keep writing!
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: Mechanical Magic
Prologue Six Years Earlier Through endless trails of blustery waters, was the unwavering lighthouse. It was bright and welcoming then, with it’s light guiding the many travelers who would come ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: Rescue
Thank you for the review! I really appreciate you to took the time to read the poem. However, I wrote the poem this way for certain reasons. First, there really ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: The One
The one poem that won my heart. Simplistic. I like it.
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: Rescue
Based off a girl I know In your strange land, the place known as the neighbor’s backyard, You’d be laughing wild for no reason, hair flowing like copper wave as ...
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: The Mage's Prophecy [Full]
Vincent The timeless, immortal, youthful young vampire meditated; his mind sat in a trance, his work was in progress. His legs criss-cross and his hands extended forward, Vincent hummed a ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: The Mage's Prophecy [Full]
Name: Vincent Shadowblade Age: Unkown Race: Vampire Appearance (No Anime): Black hair, black eyes, pale skin, typical teen-age 16 year old look a like vampire. Personality: He generally tends to ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: The Mage's Prophecy [Full]
Thank you Princessofdarkness! Just to be fair, since I picked two characters that weren't really a species you could choose, I'll make two dwarf characters for yah ;) And just ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: The Mage's Prophecy [Full]
Thank you Princessofdarkness! Just to be fair, since I picked two characters that weren't really a species you could choose, I'll make two dwarf characters for yah ;) Name: Davis ...
Aug 9, 2011 -
Re: The Mage's Prophecy [Full]
Name: Sharrow Skysoul Age: 700 hundred years. Race: Angel Appearance (No Anime): Blonde with rough hair, blue eyes that are as bright as the sky, and wears a satchel and ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Degeneration One Prologue
This is awesome!!! I can't wait to read more! I'm assuming this is a Fallout fan fiction, which was really good and well written. If it's not, then that would ...
Aug 7, 2011 -
Re: Heart and Soul
Well, this wasn't the whole story, if that changes anything. This was more like a prologue. The real main characters live in an orphanage on the border of Canada and ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: She's Going To Be A Model
I liked it! :) Its always like that, what you thought you would see isn't always what you should expect. Keep writing.
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Bloodlines #1: Chapter 2
I'm enjoying your story. Can't wait for more! :D
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: In my world
CCCCCOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLL!!!!!! Sorry. :) I completely understand where your coming from, and am happy to have found someone who thinks the same way I do. :D
Jul 27, 2011
