Weatherthestorm

I used the comments I recieved and made some changes. Tell me how you like it. It is has highly graphic...imagery, though, so proceed with caution. Night hung thickly, like ...

I don't believe that homosexuality should be presented in a book series that started as a children's series. Whether or not it ended up there, that's how it started, and ...

Thank you much very. I appreciate your comments immensely. I'll go back over and make the revisions. Watch for the next version! :)

Please give me the best reviews you can. Also, please include your opinions. I'd like to get some feedback on the grammar and mechanics, but also content and story-wise. Enjoy! ...

That Buchanan perspective intrigues me. From what I know about quantum physics and the other dimensions, the first five dimensions pan-out like this. The first is a dot. Sedond is ...

That Buchanan perspective intrigues me. From what I know about quantum physics and the other dimensions, the first five dimensions pan-out like this. The first is a dot. Sedond is ...

I like this one. There were definitely less clashes of point of view. There were a few things I think could still stand to be changed. Do not be afraid ...

Hey there! I'm new to the site myself, but I love to write and I'd be happy to help you along with this whole thing. What kinds of things do ...

Wow. I'm not much of a stickler for grammar, though I did notice a lot of stuff that should have been caught or fixed. But i'm more into the content ...

I don't think that is something that is meant for real public opinion. If Rowling felt that it was necessary for the character or the story plot, then it would ...

I enjoyed the poem. I wonder, though, what would happen if you tried to use more lines. Some of your lines seemed too long and it kind of breaks the ...

I enjoyed the poem. I always find it entertaining to find people who are able to successfully write 'outside of the box'. I think some of the rhymes were a ...

I'm not sure about placement or whatthe requirements are for whatever forum. whatever, but I thought that the poem was okay. You basically have four stanzas and your writing is ...

Hi. My name is Percy. I don't really have any preffered nicknames, but then again, I'm rather new to this whole forum thing, so :/ Just introducing myself and saying ...