Weatherthestorm

I think it was good. I certainly don't think you suck at poetry. I would also like to see what else yoyu write. I'd like to something else with just ...

I'd be happy to give you some feedback. I enjoyed this poem. I'm not such a stickler for the mechanics, though I do have some suggestions there, but I fell ...

To me, a fitting analogy for this poem is 'a diamond in the rough'. I'm certain there is a superb poem in there somewhere. But as was said previous, you ...

You've got great sentiment here in the poem, though I'm not sure how well it is executed. I know that I was a little lost from time to time. You're ...

The wealth of time That will stir and grow Is greater than Any man can know. For all his words, He shall never sieze Or grasp all 'Life's Oppurtunites. The ...

Let me start by saying I expect to see more of this story. You simply cannot leave us off with such a cliffhanger after such an excellently written piece like ...

Such is life, or is that not necessarily what you meant? I'm not entirely sure that 'Elegy' was the right name for this piece. There are other ways to say ...

I'm not one much for non-fiction, but the way that you've written this piece had me reading more intently than I do for most fiction or poetry. It is an ...

I wasn't saying you're a bad author. Au contrair (pardon my French[no pun intended]), I was quite pleased with the work, but there just isn't enough of it. I'm waiting ...

Hmmmm...Tense problems, eh? I"m not so sure there are any technical nor mechanical problems with it, but it is a little difficult tricky to take a first person present tense ...

Can I just say bravo? I think your rhyme is great and your meter and flow are fluid and tight, it is a piece of work that deserves pride. It ...

I read the 2am piece after reading this one, following in the pattern of sokool15. It could be a standalone if you didn't make too many references to what Glory ...

You do indeed have a talent for writing and especially grammar. However, I do have questions about your character dynamics. This event seemed too mechanical, like you were focusing too ...

Ouch. Clockwork angel was a tad rough. I agree with some of the things that were mentioned. I didn't understand the magic-turning-into-a-wolf thing. I'm still waiting for the story to ...

Took me awhile to track down where the story had ended. Finally found it here, though. It's an incredible piece. Were I you, however, I'd try and have a little ...