Weatherthestorm

Pish-posh. Let them say what they will. I applaud this piece! You run right into it with such strong convictions and you deliver! Such a bitter and passionate voice, I ...

I'm not sure how much songs differ from poetry, apart from that songs have more metrical things and generally a tune, so I'm going treat mostly as a poem. I ...

Much can be gained from editing. I tend to gravitate towards poetry and therefore, get a little more harsh when it comes to the art of verse. (I don't claim ...

I think that character development is one of the greatest challenges that writer's can face. Fiction is always harder to write for two reasons. The first being that it hasn't ...

The imagery is great. Sorry it's been awhile since I've been critiquing, but I'm back now. I think we can all agree that the length is a little too short. ...

This has potential. I'm actually surprised, upon closer analysis, to find that you have actually allueded to a very complex and complicated many in a very sophisticated fashion. I like ...

One of my favorite things about writing is the oppurtunity to present odd, unique, and extraordinary experiences. Sometimes, though, not everyone will understand or be able to relate to the ...

(To that one girl, whose heart I've yet to win...) You once said to me you wish to lead A life of love and simplicity. All of these things I ...

Hey Babyspice, I'm Percy. PM when you submit some writing. I'd be more than happy to offer you my opinion. I'm against fanfics, though, but I'm pretty much good for ...

I hate to sound like a forum here, but I think that a recent post was rather harsh and superscilious. This piece was great and very eloquent. Obviously, there is ...

I think it's great. I think it may be your specific style (you may have an e.e. cummings thing going on), but you don't capitalize every stanza. It kind of ...

Bravo! Great ryhme scheme and meter. It flowed nicely and was very entralling. You make a great many allusions here, but some of them are too vague. I know that ...

This piece jumped out at me because of the title change. I love the autumn. The days grow darker, the trees brighter, and the world is a soft orange glow ...

This is good. I dont' know if I had read the prologue, so this was new to me. It's like a puzzle and soon the pieces will come together and ...

I commend you for this poem. You've taken a perspective for something that is usually overlooked. I know a little bit about the Russian role in WW2 and I admire ...