WaywardBird

Ug, I can FEEL the potential in this story, but I'm afraid there are two points that bothered me. 1: I don't think Caleb could have an accent if he ...

This story takes place during the Prohibition Act in 1920, as you will clearly see. It's a new approach for me, and I've kind of tried to jam-pack a novel ...

Thank God! Someone has a brain! :D loved this post

I just finished QUIT YOUR JOB. BECOME A TRAPIZE ARTIST and so I duly had to check out more of your stories, and become a follower. The wide spaces between ...

that story has just become my facebook status, thank you so much. :) I loved this story, since I am a bit of a wonderbug. That is, I like the ...

Thanks so much guys, really appreciate the feedback! :D And the poem is kind of based around how 'normal' kids are usually bright and shiny, like colors, and the dark ...

Everyone cheats. This is catchy and had a nice tempo. At first, I admit, I thought the poem was silly and I have better things to do. And for thinking ...

This is one of my attempts to mimick a style used by one of my friends, which always turns out awesome so I decided to try my hand at it. ...

Hehehe, this story made me laugh. I also noticed you are relatively new to the Society, so welcome aboard. The story seemed professionally done, with just enough detail and good ...

I loved the dark tone of this poem, how it flows and keeps the beat. The rhyming is a little off in some spots, although I can't put my finger ...

YAY! He didn't die! loooving it so far,

I like Gab. It's fun, short, and to the point. Scribbles seems cool, but a bit long. Ceiling was very funny. I kind of like 'Howler.' Not to seem wolfish, ...

I liked this story a lot. A good fable to tell. However, the reactions between sun and moon seem a little strange, for instance, what is the signifigance of the ...

mmmkay I have really know idea how that made sense, and in some places it didn't, but I was STILL swaying by the end of the poem! that was beautiful, ...

I liked this a lot, but I can't really say where to go with it. My only critique is that fish don't actively 'bleed'. (Yes, this is mostly me being ...