Way2Dawn

Really out of them all I want to see Toy Story 3, as a kid I grew up watching the first movie at lest one night a week. I really ...

You drift away from the shore, from your friends, from the masquerade. You look forward and see the waves coming near you. Smack! Your hit yet you continue to walk ...

Deep and emotion great for your first post! Hard to tell what the poem was exactly about but I got the remote just of it! Though tell if I am ...

Nice prologue honestly I want to read more. Though at first I didn't expect most due to its short size, yet I was mistaken. Amazing that you were able to ...

Nice little short, yet I wonders what is the hell is going on! I mean I just read a piece before this and it had pie, and rainy day, little, ...

Strange yet somehow captivating. I don't know why but this piece really reminds me of a post world war 2 American day for young children that have nothing better to ...

Deep and emotional I like it! Romantic shorts are not my forte, but this feels much like a dramatic poem or something else of the sort. I would advise moving ...

Quite a dark poem and a good way to start of your profile, yet I wonder did you write this to describe how a scarecrow thinks if if could or ...

Fine way to start off a story a bit too short for my taste but it has me want to read more! Yet it still feels like it lacks proper ...

Interesting take on divine human evolution. Half human and half animal would be a fun way to live...for about a week. But then again I have a naturally boring life. ...

Another great piece of work AkiKersion! I like the imagery you provided of the way the moon would feel if it could. Quite thought provoking the way people see the ...

Fantastic piece to start off on and great all on its own. Socrates was a great philosopher and more then just a man with ideas, he was courageous! He knew ...

I would think that he would spend at least a night in the ER and then a good week/week in a half in recovery depending on how bad his foot ...

Nice poem it was short, sweet, and to the point. Love is still a confusing word for me and I know its not fair ,but to you I plainly see ...

The imagery in this is phenomenal. Almost makes me want to wake up early in the morning and watch the sun rise above the morning dawn, but who am I ...