Way2Dawn

Another great piece seemingly from what you have written that I have read you always included death in your poetry. Nice way of having your work brought to attention I ...

Great piece you have written! Though I only remotely get what message you have share it still can be praised for being well written and presented! Again I say great ...

Not too sure what message you are getting through with this, but I do feel the emotion in this piece. "Then bleed you out" I wonder if you mean literary ...

Though I'm not quite sure what you are trying to get through with this poem its great in its way. I imagery in this is wonderful and you did a ...

Great work on this I feel a bit of symbolize in this piece and think that it is more about the Lord protecting us from the wolfs rather physical or ...

Nice work of describe a friend with a wounded heart yet faces the facts and moves on (more or less). I wonder this runs parallel with your life if you ...

Great work I not quite share what you are trying to get through with is piece but it sounded good nevertheless. Is it a girl with a broken heart or ...

Good poem you stress the point of losing a loved one close friend or someone much great. You hit all the right beats on this piece to make it great ...

Interesting enough for me to read it twice however I'm not to sure what message you are trying to share in this, or what exactly the poem is about. Yet ...

Interesting poem at the very lest. A bit dark in its own light however. Should this run parallel to your life I raise my glass to ya! Though its not ...

Nice poem emotional and true. I know of those who smile simply because they have to. Simply to keep certain people happy or at the very lest content. Yet one ...

Great in this piece it has a bit of emotion and a lot of creativity. The flow this is a bit bumpy along te way but has hit all the ...

Nice poem sweet yet a bit too short. The title fits the poem great! I'm completely confused lol! However the rhymes where smooth and went well with what you were ...

Great poem short and to the point. You describe the rain as it is a part of you as any feeling. The rain my mask your tears but when its ...

Nice poem regarding an age old game, yet I can't help but to feel something much deeper then a game of strategy. Nevertheless the flow of the poem was smooth ...