Way2Dawn

Ehh kinda short yet grand poem nevertheless. Where length has fallen short you make up in your rhymes they flow natural and true.\ Great work on this piece and keep ...

A fine poem ladyworkz The emotion you put into this piece should not be ignored nor unrecognized. The flow was well with minor bumps and all and all it was ...

Great work emotional and true. Though I have to say that I do not believe that failure is a sin rather it is the building blocks to something great. Anyway ...

Great work on the poem. It is very apparent why this belongs in this the 'Other Poetry' section. Though the strangeness of this piece may be the reason why this ...

Fine narrative poem! Sadly these simple stages of young love its almost completely accurate and have an untimely demise. Great work in this and keep writing. -Dawn

Great work on this poem justme~. I can feel the emotion when you wrote this and tip my hat to you for that. Emotional writing is the best way to ...

You give solid points in this piece and sadly most are true though I have to disagree that tears do not last as memories do. Usually memories can only fade ...

Thanks for everyone how has read this report overall I think it is my finest. And a very special thanks to those who have reviewed and commented on this topic ...

Great lyrical poem with quick witted rhymes though there was a bit repetition towards the middle it was well written none the less. I would advise a bit of revising ...

Great poem White Rabbit! It is quite compelling with a great ending and your ryhmes hit all the right notes to get and keep me hooked all the through. your ...

A bit short but you shared all that you need to in order to makes poem stand out. Ive a read a few poems regarding dreams and I must say ...

A bit dark though it seems quite suitable should the reader permit. You did a great job telling this story through your poetry though the imagery is not top of ...

Well written and well developed! Besides a few minor mistakes this poem is great over all. Not quite sure what you are trying to get through it still had me ...

Another fine job June. Great topic to write a poem on and twist and turn it the way you did in this. Though its still not all that clear to ...

Great work! Using bold lettering to present your questions and answer them in normal text is quite innovative and original. I tip my hat to the way you present your ...