Way2Dawn

"What news do you bring me? Have we located the Item ?" Dawn had asked with a bit of impatience in his voice. "No my king not yet. However, I ...

Wow I have to confess this is great style of writing and story telling. The reading is kept in the dark about what is happening. The true conflict. And given ...

Very interesting story idea seems like it has the potential to be engaging. However, I do advise a little more detail in the characters its important, I think, to get ...

Wow, this is a really great poem. You caught my attention at the first sentence and still have let it go since. I find your rhymes amusing and easy to ...

The majority of people in this day and age seem to no longer understand the meaning of morality. Its understood that no human being is born good or bad, but ...

Strange way introduce a story. You did a good job on describing the main character and internal conflict with her friend, but I would advise putting some main idea or ...

Hey guys! I'm taking a break from Dawn Reports and hopefully will begin on Knights of Dawn (title in progress might change it later). This is only the prologue so ...

Short poem but well to the point I liked it. Though I'm not a poet and I have only written one poem I thought this one was pretty good.

Life. Despite it being a four letter word it is anything but simply. Funny how people think that life is ironic. The mentality that we live just to die. Though ...

Nice poem not moving nor is it cliche, but a steady balance of the two.

Seems like it will be in interesting story, given this first chapter, and one I will follow. As a review I would advise putting more imagery in your beginning chapter. ...

Short poem and I can see that you did put your heart into it more then time. Which is a good thing. As a review I have nothing. Its Flawless. ...

First off let me begin with saying thank you to all those who have read my previous work. This report is the completion to Dawn Reports 2 . My last ...

Strange how many times in our lives we feel alone. Not to a point where we become saddened or depressed by this, but simply that our views and opinions are ...

Seems like a nice little start to an good horror tale. As a review I would advise editing your punctuation and capitalization other then that looks pretty good!